1. c (easy)
2. a (easy)
3. c (easy)
4. e (easy)
5. d (easy)
6. d (easy)
8. b (easy)
10. c (easy)
11. d (easy)
12.b (easy)
14. c (easy)
16. b (easy)
17. c (easy)
20. b (easy)
21.e (medium) seemed to be uncontrollable
22.d (hard) couldn't follow the text):
23.a (easy)
24.a easy)
25.c (medium) goes back the the idea
26.e (easy)
28.c (easy) explained himself well
30 .b (hard) I need to learn types of poems
31-46 not posted
47. b (easy)
48.a (medium) confusing, thought it was night?
50.d (easy)
51.b (easy)
52.b (hard)
53.e (easy)
55.d (hard)
56.b (easy)
57.c (medium)
59.e (easy)
60.b (easy)
--I like how your intro mentions the morals of the two..
ReplyDelete--Your diction is a great start but your sentences are a too short..
--Your first paragraph makes good points. You understood the text and molded it into great examples.
--I like how your personality shows throughout your writing. You haven't boxed yourself in but instead used it to find examples that relate to your way of thinking.
--Your final paragraph compared the 'old' & 'new' leisure to fire and a light bulb which showed you thought out of the box and actually tried to understand your reading.
--Overall I Liked it even though it was a "thirty-five" minute essay. You went over details that I'm sure almost everyone understood.
Great job!
I agree with michelle! i liked the ideas you used, and how you presented leisure. I think you should've used more examples from the text to make the essay stronger, but for the amount of time we had to do this, I say you answered the prompt correctly. Goood job kate!
ReplyDeleteYou definitely showed your personality. At the same time you managed to use great diction. Your sentences did feel I bit like thoughts and not complete sentences but since you did have little time the turn out of your essay was good.
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